If this drive was prepped in another machine, then there's certainly something wrong. Let me know the model number/size of the drive you're working with and I'll see if I have anything similar in my stockpile.
The best way to test the BIOS compatibility is to build the drive on a different machine using a "normal" IDE controller/BIOS and then move it to the XT and vice-versa. Ideally your "normal" controller and BIOS would be using BIOS that doesn't have any of the barriers at 520MB, or 8.4G.
The current problem is that that during POST, the XT has the keyboard disabled. I tried that prompty version on my machine and I couldn't ever find the "any key" to continue.
Your clone may be different though.
I suspect it's just disabled via the interrupt controller, and can certainly be re-enabled at some point, but it may also be disabled for good reason.
You could always move the card to your Pentium machine, and the prompts will work there, but I'd prefer to move to XT only testing if possible.